Princess in Hiding (Werewolf Story)
Running through the woods wasn’t new to me; I heard nothing but the beating of my heart and the pounding of my paws. The birds weren’t making noise, not a single animal was moving. The dewy moss and rich soil felt nice between my paws. I looked up the moon it’s just disappearing telling me it was another day. I let out a howl of excitement and picked up my pace. I soon came up to the walls of the great castle, the grey rock wall was fifty feet high guards walked along the wall making sure no one was either to break in.
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TheusernameIwanted
werewolves aren't my thing...never were But, the flow of the chapter is natural, and the idea much more unique than the typical werewolf thingy! voted!
Great story, but its WRITE not WRIGHT :) Apart from that great begenning and flow of dialogues :D
Thank you so much for the dedication and letting me know of a werewolf story to read! :) Xx
Haw, too tiny a chapter. Throw in some details! There's no punctuation marks in your dialogues and even in your text. Just add 'em 'kay? :) Good luck. x
This was a well-written chapter! Yay, I loved that about it. It flowed well too, and the idea sounds really interesting. :) Great job.
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| Name | Shaylis Johnson |
| Location | Canada Eh |
| Member Since | Jun 24, 2010 |
| Votes Received | 664 |
