That was so sad, and even though it was a short story it really gave alot. It touched my heart! Very well done. I voted :)
This is a refreshing story. I haven't come across a story like this before but I really like how you write it out. Keep it up =)
'Touching' is the word for this story! I think it's a great start! Keep writing...... =D
Eeek ;o; I don't know how she'd recover from that... what a traumatic thing to happen. And Alice's sister!
Why did she have to die? Poor kid.
Your writing is once again good. The story is nicely done, very moving
Bubba...what a legit name. But seriously this story got so much sadder than I expected it to hahaha
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