So the prologue is a little dry. But really with-the-flow for a science fiction novel. :) Moving on.
It s like having a study guide for English class. I hope it turns out to be helpful. :)
I can say that you've described your characters well. :) Keep up the good work. Continue writing. Will definitely continue reading :)
That got my attention! Lol, I'm reading on, your characters are well thought out, this is a great idea
@My0wnS3lf I will but I have a few other stories to get to now so i'll get back to yours tomorrow;)
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