I'm kind of confused with the dialogue. :/ It's all over the place, but I love it though <3.
I LUV THE NEW DEIDARA! Seriously they should have made him like this in the first place, he is just so funny now!
I don't think that's how Deidara acts. It seems more like Tobi's personality to me.
no offense but deidara is acting a little bit out of character but other than that he is way more nicer:-) :-) :-) :-\ :-) :-$
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaH!!!! ...........love it.....sasori!!! Fangirl faints^_^". finally a good sasori love story:DD
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