The Burning Desire Within

I felt it, the burning desire that lingered inside me. i couldn't control it, I felt my wings become tattered and change to black, I felt my red eyes darken, my hair becoming a deep reddish black. I felt my canine teeth extend, long black claws forced from my fingers where my nails used to be, a long slithering black tail had petruded from behind, the black horns that punched through the skin at the top sides of my forehead. I saw my entire skin was black. I wanted to control it, to force it back, to hide it, but I couldn't. It has once again taken control of me, my body, my mind. Pushing my conscious to the furthest of my mind where it was clouded by the darkness that was currently exposed.
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@Midnight_Lily When different characters speak it should be a new paragraph. It makes it confusing when you have three characters talking in one paragraph.
Good narration. But be careful with the grammar and punctuation to make your story better. Anyways, good chapter. :) Keep up the good work! :)
@Midnight_Lily Yep no problem :) yeah, I figured that one was just a type but thought to point it out all the less.


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