Oh My godd the ending, Lool :) That mustve been awkward. Very passionate, quite HOT stuff going on in the first chapter ;) Lool, keep writing :)
love the descriptions they really set the scene and nate sounds hot to bad he's a player. on to chapter 2:)
OMG ! That was some hot and steamy action xD Hahaha. Great work on descriptions. (: Off to your next chap!
LOL, *drools* i will surely die once my relative knew i am reading this kind of stuff but what the heck they wouldn't knew ahah :D love the story keep going ;)
Awesome chapter, I love your plot too. You could use a little fixing up with the grammar. But you're good to go! Voted
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