Dance to Death {FIN}

22 Part Story 10.8K Reads 206 Votes
VideoGAmer123 By VideoGAmer123 Completed
Annika was having the perfect life with a normal mom and her amazing best friend Crystal. Then she came. The new girl, Olivia, joined the dance club and Annika instantly doesn't like her. When girls start dying, Annika believes she knows who it is, but what is the new girl hiding? What happens when Crystal start changing and her only hope is the new girl? Everything that Annika loved turned into a disaster when she learns secrets that she didn't want to hear in the beginning. 

A/N: I know this story doesn't sound realistic but I was REALLY young when I wrote this. Probably 11 or 12 and as I read it now, it just sounds crazy. But if you want to read it, then give it a shot. :D 

Cover done by: calumsrage

A/N: Other photos will be posted soon. Other users who made me covers for this story. forest898, calumsrage, Secret_Verbena 

Remember, you're awesome and amazing!

*THIS WAS PROBABLY MY FOURTH STORY I WROTE. I WAS 12. PLEASE FORGIVE ME. I KNOW THEY ARE GRAMMAR MISTAKES, MISSING WORDS, AND THINGS THAT DO NOT MAKE ANY SENSE. READ FOR YOUR OWN GOOD.*
Omg my name is Anikka... thats kinda creepy. Just saying @VideoGAmer123
New girl sounds scary! O_O I loved it, ve well written! Voting
AWWW. That was a nice name for the tittle of the play, and your story.
The whole story gives you a nice image of what you talked about. The girl getting the part, her friend. It's things that relate to us.
The poor new girl..i feel so sorry for her :( loving the sorry though
The plot sounds very interesting! I would continue reading. Although, there are a few grammatical errors, those don't really matter because I could still understand what was going on. Keep writing!
The title caught my eye and so does the plot.  This chapter is a little short but I assume that they will  get longer.  I think you should space out the dialogue a little bit more, to make it easier to read. Other then that  I enjoyed reading it, good job.