Ohhh there is a guard guarding the school ! is this a boarding shool ? I like the start, it's short but is good for its length :)
This is very good and interesting. It ended with a cliffhanger, very smart way to keep the readers interested. Good job.
Love it so far!! it mysterious and cool coz u make the school sound like its some bad, torture school when its not lol so well done! ;D
this was really good! grabbed and held my attention to the end, great details, and saw no mistakes.
Cliffhanger ending!!! Great start. Love the main character so far. Keep writing! :)
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