In Your Eyes

4 Part Story 355 Reads 13 Votes
Cuilwen By Cuilwen Updated 2 years ago
Sergeant Emmeline Jones had it all, well as much as one could have working as an Explosive Ordinance Disposal specialist in the middle of the Sudan. However, when an explosion goes wrong, it takes more than the man she loved with it. Brought back to the States, Emmeline must learn to cope in her new condition, without the comfort and camaraderie of her fellow troops, or succumb to the darkness.
liveoutloud23 liveoutloud23 2 years ago
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A5HL3IGH A5HL3IGH 3 years ago
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XxSwimmer_ChickxX XxSwimmer_ChickxX 3 years ago
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