good job with the character development all the characters charismatic, you've done a great job with your story
holy crap this is the best story ive read all week no lie srsly, though, good job
The beginning reminds me if the story being a rockstar sucks but that's okay it's good
Lolz most guys actually enjoy it if you lick their hand your supposed to bite them
love this sotry already because MY NAME IS IN IT!!!! lol, okay so im going to actually start reading now!
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