great begining and I especially love the last line, it really makes room for the story to begin... very creative, very poetic
I love how you write, it's great. I can tell the rest of the story is going to be fantastic! I voted :)
Totally confused and totally want to find out what's going on. So many questions! But yeah this is an awesome intro!!!
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