Young Love

Its always wrong when it seems too easy, therefore you do not seek freedom or question much frightened by the slight possibility that he may slit your throat or suffocate you to the graves Paranoid by your own words, fearing them turn into something that you would never imply. In your heart your frightened and in your mind your scared, in your walk your limping but your strength is nowhere To this day your tears may shed And enough is enough, your grief will be fed.
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This is great! But as citykitty said, spelling, capitalization, and grammer, is an issue. I love the layout thought! Great job.
You really need to wrok on grammar, spelling, and capitalization. Try typing it and proofreading it before posting the story.
it's interesting.. after reading, you will feel like reading more... I just started writing a story, hope you will check it out.. 
Ohmygosh....I've never ever cried that much in a story....wow. That was an amazing story tho. 
I really super like it so far I suggested your story in mine just so you would know, I hope that's okay?
GOOD BEGInning! You got rid of my hyperness a little bit... but it was worth it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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