You really need to wrok on grammar, spelling, and capitalization. Try typing it and proofreading it before posting the story.
it's interesting.. after reading, you will feel like reading more... I just started writing a story, hope you will check it out..
Ohmygosh....I've never ever cried that much in a story....wow. That was an amazing story tho.
I really super like it so far I suggested your story in mine just so you would know, I hope that's okay?
GOOD BEGInning! You got rid of my hyperness a little bit... but it was worth it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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