Every Night

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Paul By Paul Updated 3 years ago
Every night, right before midnight, when another long day is done and the whole world is sleeping, I leave our house on the cliff and head down to the beach. As my bare feet hit the soft sand, still warm from a day in the heat, and my lungs take in the cool night air, it reminds me of the moment I first met you.
How lovely and poignant - hope it isn't true - but even if it were what a love you must have...              VT.
Wow, that was just breathtaking and so full of raw emotion, I loved it!
Ok, so I had no idea... that this would even be so... I mean you just... really know how to jerk a tear... or two.. ok a whole lot -.- Seriously though, I can't stop reading everything you've written xD
Whoops that "et" was a typo. Darn, uncontrollable touchscreen keyboard! :p OK that's all.
Once again, I`m spechless. Your work of art is just amazing. It takes you into another world. 

Your talent is rare, and it`s obvious that everything you write comes from your heart. Keep it going.
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