I am going through a situation like this one this was a very well written poem. Fantastic job!
The only thing I would change is the title, but the poem is so amazing, forget I said that!
Wow! This is an amazing poem! I could see a real-life picture of this happening. Your words are feelings put into something named. Love it!
Not sure the title matches the poem. If there was less emphasis on the hate, then I would believe you were free.
@bright_dreamer yeah i noticed that "49" xD so i will read them u 2 if u want u can read mine ;
I think quite a few people could relate to this.
This is good work, love. =)
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