Your description was amazing and his story sounds so cool! Definitely deserved the vote and will continue after I get to he other stories!
Wow, this is good, very mysterious and a new twist to vampires too, I cant wait to read the next chapter... why wait?
That's why I don't wear heels because somehow I always fall. -.- anyway awesome description, and no errors.
I usually don't like Vampire Stories but this is pretty good. Keep up the good work! Voted! ~Aaliyah~
Interesting, but Vampire is not my type of story.... But for those who love vampire, they should totally read this! :D
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