Batteries Not Included
Melanie has a pretty freaky life. She lives with her gay older brother and his boyfriend. Her parents fight so much they should join WWE. Her best friend has the friendliness of a blank piece of paper. Now, her eye patch wearing ex-boyfriend is back, with some unknown motives and seems to want to rock Melanie's world again. And it looks like he brought along his giggly and pregnant girlfriend. Also, who is this really sweet, but kinda clueless, guy that pretty much just dropped out of the sky? What is that thing on his arm and what's up with his eyes? And what does the world's biggest medical company and an ex-scientist have to do with him?
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slantingwillow
I really liked it. You gave me a bit of a schi-fi feel, even if it is in the 80s. Your cover is great. Voted!
i've never read a book with a chapter written in 1986 and your story flowed very well and perfect dialogue used. You explain eveything through the characters
@LadyAstor yes!! That's the Kyle XY....I never watched the show, maybe some episodes and your first chapter reminded me of the show.
Very intriguing prologue! Caught my attention right away! Your writing flows and your description is great! Keep it up! :)
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