The repetition is really cool , also having similar lines to begin the poem and to close it off is nice :)
Your poem is amazing. I can really feel the emotions you put into it. Great job! If you want, you can check out my poem even though it's not that good.
What do yiu say if you see a beautiful piece of poetry? :) marvelous :] all the emo ti ons explained in a few lines :]
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