oh my gosh this is really good! :) i love it! all the characters seem soo real! :)
I really like it :) i laughed at the Ice cream part :') hehe!! I think you must keep on writing!! :)
The beginning was eye catching and although "player" is a big cliche, this doesn't seem to be very cliche-ish which is a good thing! Well done!
Can't wait for the next chapter! :D It's quite funny and I like the way the two of them "argues" This story definitely has potential! <3
Mason and Alex are so cuteee!!! You should write on. I'll vote and read and everything. :DD
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