Silent Screaming

Mobs. Riots. FIres. Death. Natalie Maverick has experienced all of these things in the eight years of her life. They were a regular thing in Blackwell Virginia, her hometown. They riots have always been bad, even before Natalie was born. However, they were never this bad. In a riot gone bad, Natalie and her closest friend Dominic are forced to leave town, fearing that they would be in even more danger than ever. That's when disaster strikes. While resting in a house, a lightening storm started, and the house was struck by a bolt of lightening, setting it on fire. Trying to get out safe and sound, Natalie and Dominic get badly injured. That's when Natalie loses everything important to her; her precious memory and her beloved speech.
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Awesome a lot of action, you do need to however pay attention to your grammar that's all:)
Wow! Confusing to start out, but after reading the summary makes more sense. :) Soinds really interesting. Oh, and I really love your cover! Who made it?
intrestsing story line very original i like it! Adding to my library! :) super great so far!
i like the first paragraph very discriptive :)
You have a lot of description in action [what they're doing], but you don't have much details where they are and such. Broaden that up for a clearer picture.
yep well loveee how the first paragraph totally caught me! pulled me in like a fishy lol
I liked how you started the story so far and I love the humors in it like the burger and all. It was unque and also interesting! Going to read more!


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