This really caught my attention fast! The concept is just unique and really gets you thinking lol.
I really like the concept of the story. Very interesting. It certainly catches the reader's attention. I'll certainly read more. (:
It really made me want to read more. I really enjoyed reading it. I'll add this to my reading list (The First Short Story that I’ll add :D). Good Work!
Very catchy and left me wanting more! Love the premise of the story and can't wait to read more! Thanks!
Very good. Grabs your attention quickly and keeps going. Good pacing, great concept at the core of the story. Really enjoyed it -- thanks!
Good Story, but it had a tendacy of being a little repetitive. It was an amazing story line. You did a great job.
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