Sounds great so far!! You are using very insightful words.. if that makes sense... very captivating. I especially like the first paragraph ;)
The first chapter is CAPTIVATING!! wow makes me want to read more! on to the next chapter!!
Dang it girl!!! I didn't read that!! lol Great gerat great beginning!! :P Alright off to read the next!!! :D Kay xox
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