i felt it was a bit rushed. it's quite interesting. but somehow i don't really like the prologue. it's normal.
btw, u should edit the word "vomment" at first, i thought it read "vomit" XD rofl!
I love the prologue!! People have times when they don't want to be on top :) This intro is so true XD
I like this as a prologue and am interested to see how it all works out, going on to chapter 1...
I love it so far even though you only have Prologue. Hope there are more chapters to read!!! Voted.
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| Name | Izabella Rina |
| Location | Narnia |
| Member Since | Sep 29, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 417 |