This seems pretty darn good! Just don't make it weird like Stephanie Meyers did to her dream.
Part One: This was a wonderful intro to what is to come :) I cant wait to read more!
Omfg. Im so intrested right now. I just cross my fingers that the detial as i go on is good - not saying it wouldn't - love you allready though lol
ok so heres my coment : so far it sounds cool! i love how u actually wrote about ur dream! i always try but i never follow through lol! -reading on!-
Impressive beginning i was completely captivated. Got me to want to read more lol
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