helloo mam in ur preview it says u need editing? well if u still do id be happy to edit for u Love ShifterLover
Ohh! I really like the set-up for the story. This is a prologue gone right. Well done.
wow. I really liked your prologue and the interrogation room and the whole aspect of it. It really hooked me in. I HAVE to read more now :D voted.
I love the details. Its amazing. The last part was funny. It's a very catchy prologue. Good job.
For some reason I like the last line. I thought you overused commas but then I read it over and they were alright. Your character sounds interesting so far.
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