Rachel's Story

28 Part Story 350K Reads 5.8K Votes
Anita By AnitaMisra Completed
Rachel Warren was an ordinary maiden leading an ordinary yet secure life, until an unforeseen misfortune forces her to take up a post as governess to two young girls. Follow her as she travels the paths of her life where she gets her first job, falls in love and finds herself in the middle of adventures she had never dreamed of.
You do a lot of telling instead of showing ... but other than that, it's pretty good. Not very exciting/attention-catching so far, but I'm going to hang on for a bit. :)
Very intense and intriguing! It made me think of some old detective shows, sort of. Great way to start the book.
I love your style of writing!! Honestly cannot believe I did not find this story sooner. Amazing!!
"fairy-tale heroine who regularly socialized with the birds and beasts around her" 
                                    
                                    U R talking 'bout sleeping beauty??? Liked that sentence!
Wow, you are an AMAZING writer!! I have only read the first page, and I'm already hooked!! :-) I will definitely be reading on, and saving this story to my reading list! :-) Keep up the great work! :-)
You have the most effective, descriptive, and evocative writing skills I have seen on Wattpad so far. Your writing style is absolutely perfect for historical romances, such as the Regency Era. I'm splendidly surprised by your technique!