Finding Her
Jace Evans’s life is perfect. He just started High School and he has the perfect girlfriend, Violet Hathaway. So everything was perfect until the day where Violet gets kidnapped. Soon Jace starts getting anonymous letters, hinting on where his girlfriend might be. Jace is determined to find her no matter what it takes. But will he be able to save the love of his life before it’s too late?
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Meet Jace, the guy who is usually sarcastic and funny but is now damaged after losing his girlfriend. He would do anything to get her back though. His four best friends are determined to help him get back Violet and to find out who the kidnapper is.
Meet Ethan, the sweet and smart best friend everyone could wish for. He would always be there for Jace even in his darkest days.
Meet Ren. He's a computer nerd but a complete idiot to everything else.
Meet Damon. He's your typical sarcastic, arrogant and funny bad boy you can't help but love.
And finally, meet Rose, the tough girl hiding under a sarcastic facade.
Recent Comments
MaryelizabethShaw
The suspense in the last paragraph was really good and I like your dialogue! Good job (:
ohhh! cliff hanger!! :D he's so cute and adorable and she's so sweet!! :D the description is very good and the dialoge is also very good! voted
Its a very playful piece up to the end, and it causes the reader wanting more information.
Omg wat happened?! I like how it goes straight into the action. Not most writers do that. Its good ;)
hahah really liked the start with the candyfloss, shes just like me; demanding. hahah
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