Really really fantastic! It writing styles so good and ur ideas really interesting as well! I love the story!
@Amichae but she should take a while to publish it so that I can finish the book before she takes it down
Good start for a story, albeit not very original. You really need to edit a lot, all the errors are distracting.
I think you should try to get this baby published. It would appeal to many! I have just started and I'm already in love. <3
HOLY CRAP. YOU MENTIONED CRESTION FREAKING IOWA. I LIVE IN IOWA. HOLY CRAP. NO ONE EVER PAYS ATTENTION TO IOWA. YAAAAAYYYYYYYY
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