hey, i read your story and it was very intruiging and interesting! you have a talent for writing. follow it k? peace
It's about cliche, especially living with lots of boys. One tip is that you should use more description.
I love this already :D I am sometimes quite slow so I'm probably gonna struggle to remember who's who :L:L but I can't wait to read more :L
I like this :) It draws the reader in quite a lot and makes them want to read more. Plus I absolutely love the name Jace. So it's just awesome already haha :D
yay first comment! anyway this was really good, well written, great details, and saw no mistakes!
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| Name | Nickiee |
| Location | Jamestown |
| Birthday | May 11 |
| Member Since | Jun 29, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 171 |