Nic 1!i've read it nd cant wait to read more!wat abt d nxt buk????gud wrk bdw!:-)
ok I understand why he is lashing out but to poor all that hate towards a girl who has done nothing to you except will apparently love you is harsh geez chico
Okay, that was bad of Jake, but I have to say, COOL PROLOGUE! Just the first page, and yet, it is already awesome! =))
aww! i like how in your story you show the pain that jake has gone through and the actual occurrence in which jen died. can't wait to read more!!!
I know is completed and all but since I just started reading it ... I say that is a great start! lol
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