i loved your plot and how the whole story was like a long riddle that made you want to read more and more untill you got the answer
Love how you dramatized who the character was. You made the readers ponder~Good job~ It's well written too~
Interesting beginning. I wonder who "she" is. Didn't see any errors, keep writng.
Wow. That's powerful stuff!!! The title was so intriguing and I really got shivers down my spine with those first lines - not in a bad way. LOVE IT!!!
Now that was awesome! That is just another story I have seen on here, that is not cliche! You go girl!
Adding to reading list thats how much I enjoyed this :D very well written and amazing descriptions. Want to read on now :D
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