BDSM.

12 Part Story 143K Reads 1K Votes
LisaImmelman By LisaImmelman Updated 3 months ago
It was never supposed to be about making love, it was about sex. It wasn't about feelings, just feeling; touch. Taste. It didn't have to hurt, it didn't have to significant, it didn't need to be named.  Fucking, not loving.

But it wasn't.
HannahColeman0 HannahColeman0 4 months ago
I really hope you make it big because you're writing is phenomenal...I actually look to you for inspiration.
ACNichols ACNichols 6 months ago
Dialogue is always a new paragraph unless its the same person speaking.
aprilknox99 aprilknox99 a year ago
you need to use paragraphs but other then that, it's great :)
Princess1Peach Princess1Peach a year ago
Oh my god!  I am having a crazy fan girl moment, but the description for your story is so good, and so is this first chapter.  I love your writing style, it is very edgy.