BDSM.

12 Part Story 154K Reads 1K Votes
Lisa Immelman By LisaImmelman Updated 10 months ago
It was never supposed to be about making love, it was about sex. It wasn't about feelings, just feeling; touch. Taste. It didn't have to hurt, it didn't have to significant, it didn't need to be named.  Fucking, not loving.
    
    But it wasn't.
I really hope you make it big because you're writing is phenomenal...I actually look to you for inspiration.
Dialogue is always a new paragraph unless its the same person speaking.
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Loving it. Think you're missing one word in the first paragraph: 'to be significant' hehe. I am sick of BDSM love stories but want to give this a try after reading your Nigger book. Also, I haven't read on wattpad in ages and felt like doing so today.
you need to use paragraphs but other then that, it's great :)
Oh my god!  I am having a crazy fan girl moment, but the description for your story is so good, and so is this first chapter.  I love your writing style, it is very edgy.