BDSM.

12 Part Story 151K Reads 1K Votes
Lisa Immelman By Lisa Immelman Updated 9 months ago
It was never supposed to be about making love, it was about sex. It wasn't about feelings, just feeling; touch. Taste. It didn't have to hurt, it didn't have to significant, it didn't need to be named.  Fucking, not loving.

But it wasn't.
I really hope you make it big because you're writing is phenomenal...I actually look to you for inspiration.
Dialogue is always a new paragraph unless its the same person speaking.
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Loving it. Think you're missing one word in the first paragraph: 'to be significant' hehe. I am sick of BDSM love stories but want to give this a try after reading your Nigger book. Also, I haven't read on wattpad in ages and felt like doing so today.
you need to use paragraphs but other then that, it's great :)
Oh my god!  I am having a crazy fan girl moment, but the description for your story is so good, and so is this first chapter.  I love your writing style, it is very edgy.