I love the book, but are the large spaces in between the paragraphs really necessary?
Please write more on this story it's soooo good!!!! You write with so much detail it feels so real:)
I know it's unedited but with a few changes here and there...it would definitely be an extremely enjoyable read. Great job on a spur of the moment writing.
well shes lucky she even gets to get to a place like this to be close to nature and NACKED! its like you'd probably get a ticket for it...
I think the story could go on its bee really great! It could even get a lot of votes:)
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