Eyes of the Fallen
Jasmine is a junior in high school, and is hated by nearly everybody she knows, including her own father, due to her rude personality, unattainable beauty, and terrifying red eyes, all part of a curse that has been haunting her since birth. Finally aware of her curse, thanks to a stranger who also bears the same curse, Jasmine decides to try to ignore it and live a normal life, which is quickly proved impossible when she is attacked, and forced to learn to control her new found powers.
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leahisamazing40
Very interesting plot but the writing threw me off the story. Few mistakes, missing words within the first three pages.
This sounds like it will be really intersting. I voted and I'm going to the next chapter. =)
Like the last commenter, this is very well written. I have a good feel for this type of story and it has me interested! Keep it up!
I really like how unique the character sounds. Red eyes, very different. The story flowed really nicely, and two thumbs up!
Ooh , I like the flow of this :) its very interesting :) I'm gonna keep reading but ur cover freaks me out *voted*
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