Haha... He deserved it!!! i'm dying to see how is that sister of his and how he's supposed to take care of her.... love the idea for the story... Genius! >.<
o.o Dead King. I have have same thing in my story! lol xD but good job! Your writing style is nice and you keep it simple! :D *vote* and onto the next chapter!
Great start! the beginning draws the reader in adn the story is really well written!
Great plot so far, it's really nice and interesting so far! Upload more soon ! I want to know what happens next !
Ohh! Very capturing and i like how you develop your character gradually. Great start:)
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