I like the story, although you could have extend the story by making Adrian apologize more, it was short and to the point but I like it, it is a great story.
I am pretty sure you got the names from Vampire Academy Because Sydney SAGE ADRIAN Ivashakov and MASON Ashford!?!
His sounds very good. I noticed a couple mistakes but other than that it was perfect! Haha my name is Sage!
Adrian is a selfish jerk X( I can't believe tht he turned down his mate n yet he doesn't want her 2 date any1 X(
wow.... its only the first chp and im crying already!! :( but i love it already :)
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| Name | Princess (: <3 |
| Location | Narnia! Duh! |
| Member Since | Jan 31, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 41,202 |