My Life As A Teenage Mermaid

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Citrus_Pterodactyl By Citrus_Pterodactyl Completed
A girl named Stacey Miller is thrust into a world of magic and adventure when she finds out that she and all her family are mermaids. Accompanied by her various magical friends, she goes through obstacles in her new life.

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Whoa!! Slow down! You've got a good plot, but you're moving it WAY too fast. Consider adding more detail, buildup, and character development.
BTW, I love Jenna!
I think jellyfish can still sting you if it's dead. I might be wrong though