This is great! I can't wait to see the remaining part. It's been a day since i finished reading it and it feels like a year. Please,go on!
Your story is awesome, I love how creative the plot is. You have tons of details and your creativity is awesome, you're a talented writer:)
Your story is so awesome! I totally love it. Its original and creative. you should write more. You have great writing skills! really amazing..... :))
Whoa... this story is GREAT! :) You have a really distinct writing style that is really captivating.
This story is going on my library what can i say i love fantasy. I read the first chapter and so far i have nothing negative to say :) you are awesome. Voted.
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