I really like that your book is unique in the whole prologue and everything. It def keeps me interested :)
I love the idea of your story! I love Ezriel's name and I love how you introduced the story! definitely voting :)
i love the start, you have just the right amount of mystery to make it intriguing but not to overpowering. great job, keep it up! (: x
Wow... it was amazing! Great detailed! It was also well written! And great characters! Voted!
They do sound really hot! lol anyway this was a good opening into your story, didn't see any mistakes, and well written. :)
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