The Boundary

Our world has never been what it seems. Out of arrogance, humans have forgotten their own history and this flaw is about to cost them the world they hold so dear. As Alyssa Orran, a 16 year old orphan who lives with her brother, is about to find out when she is attacked by a mysterious stranger who claims to be from an organization known as the Gatekeepers that protect the boundary between this world and another. Now, as her familiar world comes crumbling down around her, she must find herself and her past in order to protect her world from being caught up in the ancient war between the Mystics and the Ravagers which threatens to rip both worlds apart. ** This story is inspired by the characters of the Sendai Roleplaying Site. To give credit to my Sendai Family, I've listed the characters and who originally roleplayed them. More characters will be added as the story progresses. Terra: Alyssa/Ali and Zachery/Zosimo Sesshy: Sesshy/Destiny Siren: Carmen/Siren Wolffie: Arlesh M'shar/Wolf ****A special thanks goes out to Shinku who has patiently edited and reviewed each chapter of this story :) Thanks Shinku!!!!
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Long??? People are crazy haha I imagine this is about 5000-6000 words which is really quite average haha
@retawolf I'll point them out after I'm done with the other two reads I have to do xD.... Oh and btw, I love your witty humor!
this is so well written. The paragraphs are very long but not pointlessly so, you have awesome discriptions!
The paragraphs were quite long and 6 pages is quite a lot for just a first chapter.
I lost my interest very quickly and got bored, but it was a nice start!
my vote is not working :( *crys* :( descriptions are great btw really gives the effect of the story perfectly
whoahhh! the descriptions are amazing haha(: i feel like you set me right into the story, and I like it a lot! Great beginning!


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Name Terra Johnson
Location Spring, Texas
Member Since Nov 23, 2011
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