Always in a teenage girl's life a time come when she falls for her guy friend... Ask me, I'm 18 ;) btw love it till now
Awesome start!!! I'm already hooked, it's such a cute story line!!! I'm looking forward to reading the rest!!
This is a great start! I like the balance of dialogue/description. Off to read more =]
I love Jason already. He's charming, haha. Lol and he definitely likes flirtig with her.
I like the descriptions in your story but it does seem a bit cliche. I don't think I saw many errors either. Voted
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