Sorry it took me so long to comment, I got distracted xD Anyeay, good start, descriptions are good and I love the character already :) Voted and reading on.
This is a great starting! You described the main character very well and right off the bat the reader takes a liking to her :) Great job!
Wow! I like Jeanne's character a lot! She's a strong protagonist who's loyal to her friends and stands up for what's right :)
Nice, I love it when the protagonist is a tough girl and not "Oh <insert name of supernatural boyfriend>, save me!"
@mimzy_bunny Hey, I'm gong to add your story to my library! I'll give you a good review on monday
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