Oh my gosh that was beautiful! I loved it! I'm adding it to my library so I can read some more later.
I love it<3(: great job! it's so deep, beautiful, passionate<33(: talented is what you are! :D
Aww!!! Omg I seriously loved this soooo much!!! That's some Shakespeare ish going on!! Lol you're an amazing writer!!! And soooo talented :D
This has a fun flow to it :) The rhyme scheme is much more consistent than your other poems...and perhaps stronger for it! nice work :).
wow, this is good xD I like how it just comes to you out of nowhere and still turns out to be really good..LOL :DD I loved it! *voted!*
It's beautiful!! I really hope I could write Poems as great as you are! LOL
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