I like it so far. The last part keeps me out just a smidge but I think thats why I like it :)
Oh, is the mystery person a criminal?! The ending scared me a bit, which is good ^.^! You most definitely have my vote dear. *~* Dial-An-Alice*~*
i like it it's a good start for your story which make me whish i could have a start like this lol :):)
that's good i've just signed up to this site can you please tell me a bit about it please can you add people as friends?
haha, I love the mom xD and the ?? POV is creepy.. O_o Great so far, thankx for asking me to read :) I love it
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