Wow! great start to get the readers interested in the rest of the story defo made me carry one reading! love this major bro! ;D *voted* Charlotte x
This is very attention grabbing! One of the most unique prolouges i have ever read(: good job!
Really love the way you started this, with the short dramatic sentences. It sounds great, and I can't wait to read on. ;)
WOW this caught me and hooked me in the minute I read it :D Keep going! Lol my name is Annabelle too (well people call me Bella...but...) Haha love it <3
Well I haven't read many mysteries in awhile so this definitely attracts my attention. Moving on to 1st chapter.
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