Woah, I really liked this it's so intense and mysterious. I love your descriptions and your summary is epic. Nice!
Love the shortness of the chapters. This is good! I agree with @BellaMarieSwanCullen , epic! Makes me want to read on which I think I might!!
wow. that was intense,and i like that. i felt like i was your character. u discribed her emotions very vividly and i love tht
Hm, interesting start. I agree with a user a few down: this part is void of emotion. Right up until the very last line, which strikes me as melancholy.
I like the prologue. It catches the readers attention. Escially when the figure fades away :) anywayss this is very original-voted
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