Angels in the shadows of Demons
The clock strikes ten and we all go astray the clock strikes eleven and the shadows come out to play the clock strike twelve and we all fade away…
The sands of time have started to flow and everything has been set into motion. Enticed by the shadows they lure you in slithering across your flesh, embracing you like a long lost friend. You dance amongst them, but unbeknownst to you, you’ve stumbled into the rabbit’s hole. A dark fairy tale is unfolding and you wish to escape but it’s too late. Amongst the shadows your pleas cannot be heard.
The stage has been set and the play must begin. You would do well to remember that appearances can be deceiving. That good and evil can become as twisted as the human heart. Good intentions could easily become the dagger in your back when right and wrong become muddled. Are you good or are you evil? A soul twisted with sin, your wrongs are reflecting back at you. Before the curtains close which path will you choose?
Enchantingly wicked and twisted with sin. Do you dare turn the page?
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marvel_struckk
Woah, I really liked this it's so intense and mysterious. I love your descriptions and your summary is epic. Nice!
Love the shortness of the chapters. This is good! I agree with @BellaMarieSwanCullen , epic! Makes me want to read on which I think I might!!
wow. that was intense,and i like that. i felt like i was your character. u discribed her emotions very vividly and i love tht
Hm, interesting start. I agree with a user a few down: this part is void of emotion. Right up until the very last line, which strikes me as melancholy.
I like the prologue. It catches the readers attention. Escially when the figure fades away :) anywayss this is very original-voted
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