Everything flows so well, it's so beautiful.
I can really feel all of the emotion being shown, which makes it even more beautiful. :)
I love how you ryhme every line in each stanza. It makes it flow so well..this is great!!
This is great. My only comment would be to perhaps change deepest to deep. I think the rhythm would flow a little better...but that's just me. Good job. xx
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