This is not the type of stories that I love to read but I'm willing to gave it a shot! I will tell you what I think.
I love how you put so much detail. It helps the reader picture everything that is happening...
Please don't get me wrong, but I like your other story titled: My boyfriend is a country superstar. You are so detailed, nice job.
i have nothing bad to say about this story! NOTHING! :) except i wish it was longer....:/
You've got a great balance between your descriptions and your details about the characters. It's well written and enjoyable to read :) Keep going at it!
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