A beautiful angel; Darina DeLuna, displeases her Mistress Aphrodite, Greek Goddess of beauty. How? Simply by being prettier then her. The punishment? To suffer down on earth, where men of power seeked to keep her prisoner just to be Emperor... of the world. Why? When she sings with such a voice as soothing as silk, and her beauty she can hypnotize the wisest, or strongest of men. With a heart-of-gold, this talented girl looks for someone to save her... But will it come?
c'mon hurry n finish girl!!!!!!! ya u know who dis is lol its ashley!!!
Great beginning, it really caught me and made me want to keep reading. Good job!