Then you're writing is amazing if English isn't your first language. I'm in awe of anyone who can write so well in a language that's not second nature to them.
This is a great start, really gripping. You've got a lot of punctuation errors but the story is intriguing.
I'm not much a reader of romance, but this chapter was actually pretty good, I enjoyed it.
THis is interesting too. What is the time period? I like this new kind of mystery.
Wow, all I did was read the synopsis and i got sucked in...good job so far! This is going on my reading list!:)
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