So amazing!!!!!! I adore it! The meaning and the flow is so captivating! I especially like how you used the year and age and his view on life and stuff <3
This made me cry! Oh my gosh this should really be a story! I love the fact that he tracks her down and proposes in the end!
BEST POEM EVER. Wish I could write like this. It made me cry, aha not kidding! Far out I love this :D
Too long but a long better than the previous one you recommended to me. Try writing sonnets next time. I'd like to see how yours end.
That's a brilliant poem... wow. I don't know what else to say! It's just amazing! Voted!
I realy enjoyed this poem . It brought tears to my eyes and I love the way it rhymed . really well done :D keep up the awesome work .
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